首先优胜教育和大家分享一下英语作文的写作技巧，其中首要的一点就是无论在英语写作还是汉语写作当中常常会提到的一点，及时要紧扣命题，英语写作当中会有一些题目或者要求，学生们在经过自己理解之后开始进行写作，其中学生们能否将扣住命题考察的是学生们的身体能力，如果在写作过程但中不能够扣住命题，那自然分数不会很高。

其次就是要有深度，在英语的写作过程当中太多的考生在作文当中所写的内容仅仅是蜻蜓点水一般，说白了就是说了一些无关紧要的东西，然后就结束了，这对于阅卷老师的感官不会产生什么好的印象，其一造成作文的内容质量不高，其二老师对作文的印象不好，从而分数不会很高。还有一点就是文章当中一定不要出现语法的错误，尽可能的运用自己熟悉的语法，不要为了想要加大自己作文写作的难度，而强行的运用自己不熟悉的语法，这样不但不会使作文加分反而会出现扣分的情况，毕竟老师们对于语法的错误非常的重视。

最后一点就是礼仪不能够太俗浅，作文如此重要严肃的事情，思想低俗的文章是不可能拿到好的成绩的，有些同学想要通过出奇制胜的方式，让自己的作文表现的标新立异，以此来获得阅卷老师的重视，这点是行不通的，在英语作文当中立意要大气，境界要高，避免出现低俗趣味，这点要谨记。

下面分享两个满分作文希望对大家能够有所启发：

要求：现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。

My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.Many trees are cut down,and water and air are polluted.As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly,I often walk to school.It can reduce air pollution.Secondly,I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom.Thirdly,I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.

要求：每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友！你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。

Should We Help Strangers?

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．

Some think we should try to help strangers．Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．We may come across some trouble and need others'help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．

However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness．

In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble．If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love．

优胜教育在对孩子的英语进行辅导的过程当中，对于作文这一块是一大重点辅导项目，一对一的进行针对性辅导，帮助孩子们打破英语学习当中的瓶颈，如果想要对优胜教育进行细致了解的话致电400-601-6869免费获取其中详细信息吧！